Comments on: Class Sketches (1 of 4) http://www.1001words.com/2008/05/class-sketches-1-of-4.html We live in an age of forgetting. Tue, 16 Mar 2010 12:17:31 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.1 hourly 1 By: Mike http://www.1001words.com/2008/05/class-sketches-1-of-4.html#comment-1558 Mike Sat, 24 May 2008 01:38:26 +0000 http://www.1001words.com/?p=1458#comment-1558 How about an update on your writing class? How about an update on your writing class?

]]> By: Anonymous http://www.1001words.com/2008/05/class-sketches-1-of-4.html#comment-1534 Anonymous Thu, 08 May 2008 00:53:31 +0000 http://www.1001words.com/?p=1458#comment-1534 The first one was my favorite (also made me laugh out loud) The first one was my favorite (also made me laugh out loud)

]]> By: Jason http://www.1001words.com/2008/05/class-sketches-1-of-4.html#comment-1533 Jason Wed, 07 May 2008 01:08:55 +0000 http://www.1001words.com/?p=1458#comment-1533 Mike, thanks for the feedback. Good comments. I'll try revising the 2nd skit. Mike, thanks for the feedback. Good comments. I’ll try revising the 2nd skit.

]]> By: Mike http://www.1001words.com/2008/05/class-sketches-1-of-4.html#comment-1532 Mike Wed, 07 May 2008 01:00:40 +0000 http://www.1001words.com/?p=1458#comment-1532 I laughed out loud at the 1st one and 3rd one. I think the 2nd one doesn't work because the unusual predicament wasn't fully explained at the beginning: 1) the broken oven should be introduced at the beginning. 2) there should be a reason for the Guy and his wife to be excited about all of the ingredients coming in the box. Like, their cats attacked and tore open the bags of groceries containing the box of sugar, box of baking powder, etc. 3) You could also give them a reason to be excited about the eurpoean adapter. This one kit solves all of their ridiculously disparate needs. I laughed out loud at the 1st one and 3rd one. I think the 2nd one doesn’t work because the unusual predicament wasn’t fully explained at the beginning:

1) the broken oven should be introduced at the beginning.
2) there should be a reason for the Guy and his wife to be excited about all of the ingredients coming in the box. Like, their cats attacked and tore open the bags of groceries containing the box of sugar, box of baking powder, etc.
3) You could also give them a reason to be excited about the eurpoean adapter.

This one kit solves all of their ridiculously disparate needs.

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